Despite this comic being three times the length of a normal strip, this one progressed rather smoothly and I’m actually really pleased with how it turned out. I make it a point not to use grey tones too often, but I feel they were used for appropriate emphasis here. If I can turn out more comics like this on a regular basis I think I might be in business.
Quick note for those of you who’d look at James’ tabs in the fourth panel, yes I’m well aware of the character’s (and by extension my own) comments on sexy fan art. This is a little thing I like to call “humorous hypocrisy”. It comes from the complex relationship many of us have with fan service (don’t lie we’ve all been there).