Oh Goodie!

Good comic, really, both versions. But the posted version still feels a lot better to me. Especially skipping the redundant storyteller boxes was a good thing.

Of course, there was one thing that was better in the alternative version. A “big production” is, if nothing else, more accurate. Also I actually started thinking about music production when I first read it (posted version). Not a good thing, and at least to some extent prevented by the wording in the alternative version. Maybe there’s an altogether better word than “production” to use, but I can’t seem to find it.